Feedback

This unit is marked in a certain way where we present our work and are given feedback so that we are able to improve our work before the final deadline submission in May.

Today, we had the presentation where everyone presented their work and our lecturers gave feedback.

The feedback that I was given was that the animation within my production wasn't very strong, which I was already aware of. One of my lecturers offered to give me guidance on how I can improve the animation therefore I will be attending my lecture in a couple of days so that I am able to improve this aspect.

The other constructive criticism that I received was that the final scene with the elephant was poor and it brought down the animation, I was advised to use a photo instead. Initially, I was going to use a photo however I thought it would appear to be lazy and that I should attempt to produce a scene but I do agree that a photo would be visually stronger.

I did receive positive feedback regarding the aesthetics of my animation and the colour palettes that I have used.

As I have put a lot of time and effort into this project, I am going to dedicate more time to it to ensure that I achieve the highest quality that I am able to. I am feeling positive that with guidance from my lecturers, I will be able to do so.

I have already sourced photos to use instead of the final scene, of which are highly disturbing and add to the impact of the overall animation.